lauren watched her heroic soldier,
walk away to war,
his silhouette pitched coldly,
against the amber sun;
perhaps he'll never return,
her heart thought sadly,
"goodbye my love".
Author notes
i read the rules
A contest entry
- Worth 1000 Words... Choose 27. by KyleBerg.
700 points, ended May 1, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what are your favourite parts?
Comments
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this strikes a cord i have a lot of friends away on tour good use of the pic good writes my friend keep it up
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I love the use of the picture.
This made me think of sad things, but I liked this a lot.
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it's kind of ironic.. in your AN you say ' i read the rules' when the only rule was to credit the picture if you use it in your poem...
but anyway.. this was a very emotive piece.. i liked the connection between the title and final line, and including dialogue was clever.. great imagery also,
Thank you for your entry
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i like your take on the promt best of luck in the contest
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