Who was I to think you were different? You lied to me like others before you.
You don't love me and you never cared.
I was a fool to be driven by your voice. I was an idiot to fall for you.
I shall never trust angels again....
You could of told me you didn't want to speak to me anymore. You could of told me you were tired of me.
What was once my greatest fear is now my greatest hope.
And i shall never trust angels again!
Author notes
Im just letting go off steam
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Angels can turn out to be devils, ay? I felt the sadness and anger in your words, as well as the glimmer of hope despite the deceit. We let love take the helm because it's supposed to have a wonderful sense of direction—but our hearts sometimes lead us astray and drive us over cliffs. Maybe there's a true angel in the valley below.....
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Thanks for reading!
And yes there is angels at the bottem. They are in '....thank you'.
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Strong, really sad. But great emotion.
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You can see the emotion coming from this poem like steam off the sidewalk on a hot and humid day. Nice write. (Is there a reason that some of your poems are double-spaced?)
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Yea, i get on here using my phone and for some reason it does that
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awwww i love this its a great write
keep writing
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Angels eh? why would you want a angel when devil's are so much more fun?
great write very touching
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I use to call her my angel.
Maybe now ill find a devil ;-) lol -
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you'd have better luck with one how did you ever find an angel ?
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Actually ive found she wasnt one. Just a fake one lol
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lol.:[
awesome
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Thank you so much!
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Great poem! Lots of anger and saddness.
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good one
i like it . good job.
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This is beautiful. I know this feeling so very very well, and I understand. This write is very emotional, and a true masterpiece. If you ever need anythng, I'm here.
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I am right in assuming this is about what you just mentioned to me
? Either way, its a good let off. I wouldn't say never trust them again, but for now perhaps it's best not. One day though you'll meet one and you'll feel like you can trust them again, but I guess right now you won't feel that 
Great write here, very emotional.
Laura.
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Thank you Laura!
Actually 'angel' was used cause I called her 'my angel'. You are right it may take awhile before I can totally trust again. Thank you so much for your support!
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