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Working out my deepest thoughts
Rationality of how dark they are
I wonder if I trust myself anymore
Train of thoughts flow like lightening
Inner fear of being judged now
Notes of people's comments stick
Gentle mindfulness session I re-coach


                      {from the DBT therapy; I will not relapse!}

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  • Blue-Rose Beauty gold member
    July 16

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    I didn't know it was an acrostic until I looked at it from the computer. That was interesting and good for you! You set your mind to something and you can do it.

    Overall grade: 5/10

    Thanks for entering and nice write

  • trekkergirls bank
    June 18

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    excellent write. I loved the picture too. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.


  • The Fun House silver member
    May 24

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    There's been many times in life I've had to check on my own sanity. I think that's good, at least then you realize you are still sane Nice job here


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    May 22
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    16.1/25

    This was interestingly done.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 9

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    This is a very thought provoking acrostic. I think you sound very much like me, especially with regards to writing!
    Thank you for your entry
    Gaylene


  • Patpowers silver member
    May 9
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    Good job with this acrostic! Nicely done!


  • Never Known
    April 30

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    Wow...

    There are so few words in this poem and yet it seem to speak so loudly I love it. Absolutly marvelous wright. Brava.

    Love,
    Never Known.


  • moaner
    April 28

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    yeap i see how you feel here! i like the simpleness of it, gives you time to think about what you've read, like a lot xxxx


  • maralisa silver member
    April 27
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    aw a wonderful write good luckin the contestmaralisa

  • J Macabre gold member
    April 27
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    That is excellent. You described writing perfectly.
    Your acrostic work has been flawless.

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