young witch
beetle-browed hair
with a deathly gaze
for-boding beside one's grave
she may be your worst nightmare
with hellish chants
hateful spells
ill-omened
impure
infernal anger
may stir a spell at you
{an ye do what ye will, as long as it harms none}
Author notes
a little different eh??
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A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 LINES or Less (W) by The Fun House.
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What did you think
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your right it is different, i like it a lot. thank you for entering.
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I like your word choice through out this piece. My favorite has to be "beetle-browned hair". I don't know why, its just interesting. Thank you forentering.
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Interesting is what people think of witches and how they are and how very little they do know
Poetically I think it could use a little tweaking but its cute
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This is really good. Makes me think of spells and caludrens and such. Awesome writehe last line is simply stellar. Thanks for sharing!
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bloody love the last line! old style language is awesome! really love this, really! fantastic pic to go wiv xxxxx
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I've been waiting for you to get back to poetry 'cause you've got the eye and the heart, what a great gift, I saw it from the first. -c
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Get back to it? Lol ive been doing lots tehehehe x x
Thankyou sweetheart *hugs*
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a interesting write for the word good luckin the contest
maralisa
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Has a dark, Halloween-ish feel to it.
I like how you added the quote at the bottom...kind of hinting around to proper use of witchcraft, then to the witches evil. -
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Lol glad you picked up on that! Yeah me is pagan ;-) x
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