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Whisper to me.

Whisper to me.
O, gorgeous Moon
Watch over me.

Watch over me.
And this new life I carry
In my womb.

In my womb,
Secrets to be kept.
A innocent life to be uncorrupted.

Salvation?

Author notes

I chose the picture prompt: http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_opptvFBa4ck/SPoe5DqHa4I/AAAAAAAAHd4/eyNIGqCGW6Y/s400/Gothic-Girls-In-Dark-Art-4.jpg

A contest entry

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  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    May 4

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    Lovely form, and beautiful imagery! You took the prompt to another level.

    Well done and and thank you for entering!
    good luck


  • Canadamomma
    April 27
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    Great write, I enjoyed how you used the last line to begin each new stanza
    Best of luck to you