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Love so sweet

laying down
resting sweetly
showing no concern
feeling relaxed

sharing this with you
this magical moment
this moment was meant for you

we look up
we smile
we kiss
we look at the trees
we look at you
we look at me
and we see
we will work
and we can be

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  • glenn shannon silver member
    April 26
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    nice song so young to have such talent bravo

  • Lovely poem, nice tone and gentle rhyme. Good work, this was a really pleasant read.

    Your quote came from The Sun Also Rises by Ernest Hemingway