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Another World

                                                          open world
                                                    vast and mysterious
                                                        distant world
                                                        few have seen

                                                    secrets of the deep
                                                      brought ashore
                                                    behind the largest 
                                                            window
                                                      outer bay wind
                                                    IMMERSE yourself

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  • Violinstrings silver member
    April 27
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    you entered this poem twice , so please remove from contest this one.