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Spring

March and wind
depend
on one another
blowing leaves
and chilly
but warm
April rain
is like a chain
holding me inside
pouring one hour
drizzling the next
May's flowers bloom
the air smells of perfume
and the plants resume growing

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  • Violinstrings silver member
    April 27

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    an interesting style but it really has rhythm so it is not choppy i love the imagery use to go from one month to the next