Windy weather
Closing eyes
Licking lips
Waiting
Hoping
Knowing
Napping
Sitting in bed
Looking through sky light
Burning Summer air
Trees waving
Breeze shaving
the redwoods
Pot sizzling
Liquid bubbling
Air smelling
Sweet
Me waking up
Sipping Gently
Hoping passionately
Feeling relaxed
Coffee
Feeling drugged
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Word Prompt by BarbedWireButterfly.
1650 points, ended April 27, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This poem was very simple. In some areas it felt as if the flow should have been different, for example a slow soft beat instead of quick, that is difficult to conquer with these types of poems though. Apart from that it was a good write. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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A good write. Coffee certainly does the trick in waking up in the morning. I enjoyed reading, simple and short. Thank you for sharing.
MxA
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