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In Memory of a Bowling League Member

A great friend
always cheerin on his team.
An eager bowler
that never wanted to miss a night.
A cheerful person with a kind heart.
He handed out Christmas cards to everyone before Christmas.
He was sick for 4 weeks i don't know what from.
His passing on the 5th week shocked the whole league.
He well always be remember for his happiness and kind heartedness
as a friend and a fellow League member

To you Pat Ryan may you Rest In Peace

Born:November 1, 1942
Died: March 29, 2009

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  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    June 1

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    that was a sad loss but with your words = great tribute to his departed soul. i experienced several deaths in my family and i relate to your write. thank you for sharing.


  • countrybabe gold member
    May 12

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    Nicely Done

    This is very nicely written. I am very sorry for your loss . This is a very heartfelt poem indeed.

    Keep writing

    Countrybabe

  • kuroiyaiba
    May 5
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    I'm very sorry. Excellent poetry.

    RIP


  • i be buddha
    May 1

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    I am terribly sorry...

    I know its always hard to give up someone close, and I am sorry that it happens.
    Know I feel your pain.
    R.I.P.


  • adios muchachos gold member
    April 30

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    Dear DT

    I've been bowling in leagues for the last thirty years, and every now and again we lose someone.
    This sounds like a "very special someone" you've lost here. There are such people in this world. People, who feel an incumbancy to lift the spirits of those

    around them, and their own spirits as well. We are twice blessed that we crossed their path.

    Condolences to all! Bowl good!

     

    John-Nevada USA


  • alias4252
    April 30

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    Indeed, the world is at a loss without a nice person, it seems kind people are becoming more and more of a minority....


  • Shakari
    April 29

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    I am sorry for your loss, but you show a lot of companionship and fondness of your friend. He is in a better place, now, and is watching over you for your safety, though. God bless and keep up the great writing!


  • awannabepoet
    April 29

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    Awe so sorry to hear this and may god bless his soul.

    Remember we must all pass and return to the dust of this earth yet it is what we do with that time we are given in between the moment of birth and the moment we leave this earth that really matters.


  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    April 29

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    very nice. you never know where or how you will meet people who will impact your life... sounds like he had a great friend in you! thanks for shaing. keep up the good work! peace to you always in ALL ways!
    -KP


  • individuality gold member
    April 29

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    a good dedication poem, we have to honour those that have gone before, it shows our humanity here in this crazy lie./ life even.


  • tawk gold member
    April 28

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    My prayers and thoughts are with you all. It is so hard to lose a someone close to us. Just know that they will always be with you just in another form. Sending many blessings and hugs your way, Theresa


  • dewluvah2011
    April 27

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    I don't know if I have anything to add to what everyone has already said.
    I'm deeply sorry for your loss. My prayers go out to Pat's friends and family.

    I do have a couple spelling corrections though:
    "He w(i)ll always be remember(ed)..."

    This is an excellent, and very heartfelt, write.
    Take care.


  • perfectsunset gold member
    April 27
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    oops forgot these

  • perfectsunset gold member
    April 27

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    Aww this was deeply emotional
    and heartfelt, but your words
    made this such a beautiful
    write. You put your heart into
    it, and it shows.

    A most treasured tribute


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 27

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    Wow this is sad The ending was different then I expected. Wonderfully written and it was a pleasure to read.


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    April 27

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    I'm really sorry for the loss of your friend!

    that must have been a shock. to suddenly not be there anymore. death sure is like a dirty kidnapper.

    this reminds me of how my late husband and I met about 30 years ago! a close friend of mine belonged to a bowling league and there was an opening. my husband-to-be was on that bowling league and that is how we met!

    death kidnapped him too, 30 years later.

    karen


  • poet2angels gold member
    April 26

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    Beautiful dedication from the heart...
    It is always so difficult to lose someone but you have put into words the feelings that you had for this person and how you miss them now...
    Great poem...
    My heart gpes out to you

    Lynda


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    April 26

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    Beautiful

    I can not express my condolences much more than I already dd to you when you told me about this. indeed may Pat R.I.P. and this poem is heartfelt and beautiful your friend is smiling up ther ein the great big sky and pointin down at you allsaying those are my true friends and I love and miss them all any ways very beautiful heartfelt tribute to a fellow bowler/friend/so much more thank you for sharing this with us all and keep up the good work my beautiful Ms. Kitty

    Love Always,
    Your Mr. Tiger


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