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that dream lives on

You know baby, it seems so long ago That me and you hoped for the same thing It feels like a whole life time ago That we shared that beautiful dream So long ago now that its hard to recall That bedtime promise of forever and a day Hard to recall the sweetest thoughts That we'd voice to one another as we lay Baby you know that was so long ago And the entire world has changed so it seems But I want you to know that dream still lives on And I hope that you find it again, even if it wont ever be me

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  • My Nemesis
    May 10

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    'That bedtime promise of forever and a day...' I like that line. I like the last line too...the willingness to not be the dream, but still hoping that they find their dream even without you.

    Thanks for entering the contest.