Slipping into the darkness of the room,
i look around wanting to make sure everything is prepared for tonight.
Lighting the candles that are secured to the walls,
i watch as the shadows leap around dancing in the dark gloom.
Out of the darkness with a glow of its own,
the stockade beckons,
hinges begging to be oiled,
to be ready for use when Master arrives home.
Lying the crops and paddles down on top of the old wooden chest,
eyes wander over to the table where Master likes to administer His spankings.
Knowing that my squeals and cries will bring Him delight,
i check the ties that will be binding me tonight.
The candles i readied for His use.
Different colors, scented,
knowing these will best bring forth the pain,
the pain that He requires,
the pain that i secretly desire.
The world may be dumb to my needs,
but my Master knows all the secrets that i keep.
The cross is in the corner ready for use,
it is here where i hope Master binds me,
ties my breasts,
accepts them for His loving abuse.
Chains secured to the floor,
leather straps, collar,
doggy bound,
there’s so much more.
Vibes and dildos i am sure will be used tonight,
cries and moans will be the orchestra playing in Master’s ears.
Body quivering as welts will rise,
anticipating the moment Master brings me to tears.
Hearing the crunching of Master’s tires,
i hurry wanting everything ready to flame His fire.
Carrying the kneeling mat to the door,
looking around i wonder if i had missed anything,
everything seems in its place,
ready for His touch,
as for His pleasure i am used.
Kneeling quietly in my place,
head bowed down as i listen to each step He takes.
Breath held as my body eagerly waits,
my wetness now a small pond,
with His touch will form into a lake.
Not daring to lift my eyes,
my body knew when He entered the room.
Feeling the firm touch of His hand,
i know it is time for the fun to begin.
Daring to lift my eyes to meet His,
the approval i saw set me at ease,
with His slut, Master was pleased.
A contest entry
- Erotic Challenge (FINAL ROUND) Season 9 by Master Ktulu.
1350 points, ended April 29, 2009, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I could vividly see the entire room. I felt your anticipation. This was beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
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such a winner
with His slut, Master is and was pleased.
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ok for once you left me speechless, i don't know how to respond to your comment except to thank you for making me smile as usual. instead of reading my old things why aren't you writing something new for me to read and i still need to read the site you sent me. i've been too tired to really read it and know what i am reading lately. but will do so as soon as i can.
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I am waiting to co-write with the one who was my first.
All men remember their first. And the inspiration of that memory is a fondness which warms the heart.
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One small grammatical error was that you spoke in future tense in the 5th stanza except for the 4th line - personally I think it would've sounded better if you had said ties instead of 'tie'
Overall the personal feel to this was rather spine chilling (that's a GOOD thing! lol!) but I feel that the dungeon was not explained as well as it could've been but the feeling of slave and Master was more tangible.
Personally, I thought that this was a write from a submissive's heart and I think it was done in a wonderfully loving way so WELL DONE! -
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you are so right about the ties and i changed it. i didn't even noticed it but that is what i get for trying to get this written before my show comes on within minutes.
thank you for the advice...
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A very heated write and a good descriptive.
You certainly have a way of drawing your reader into the scene and making them feel involved.
A well crafted piece
Jem
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thank you for the nice comment.
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Very nicely done you have written a well described piece, I like your lines, your wording and your flow and not to forget your dungeon. I wish you well in this final round.
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i think this was the best entry in this entire contest
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You have a stunning combination here;
describing a dungeon with words and a beautiful and sensual erotic write.
I felt as if I was there as I read this. Excellent job!
This is a near-perfect write. The only problem that I see is that you have gone over the 50 line limit that was set......by 1 line. It is not all that big of a set back, but will unfortunately prevent this from getting a perfect score.
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Just a question, but does an overflowing line really count as a second one? If the page was a bit wider, that would have shown as exactly 50 lines because that word wouldn't have been bumped down. Since it's not actually separated into 51 lines, does it really count against her?
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Thank you for letting me into these challenges Master Ktulu. They have really been an challenge. I know that on here that one line was over and yet when I wrote it on word it was fifty. The word spanking fit into the line on word but not here and when I realized this I started to change the sentence but then thought better of it as I had already submitted it and it was already viewed by a viewer.
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A very erotic charged write you have written. The images were very vivid. I hope you do well in the contest.
Thanks for sharing
MxA
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