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Fairytales

Lost within my own little world
Wandering in circles
So confused
Wanting to die
And wanting to live
And I sit among the trees
That look so ominous
Lacking leaves
No green
The death on the ground
Well…
It welcomes me
And I’m ready to drown
In the stream
In this fictional world
With this fictional life
It’s a fairytale
For a suicidal

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  • Holy hell, this is pretty good--I like how it all comes together in the end to match with the title, you need to start giving yourself more credit for the good writing that you do

    • thanks. And I'm just not good at confidence. But hell, you have an ego big enough for both of us. I'll let YOU take care of that

  • >.> a lot better than you think lol, the title fits very nicely and its descriptive .