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Echoes haunt the desolate shore

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  • Topnotchsy
    May 4, 2009

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    I like this a lot, and the pictures it brings to mind. Could be the beginning or end or a great book. Congrats on bronze in the contest.


  • sinkfloridasink
    April 26, 2009

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    Beautiful...good luck in the contest. I like the one or two liners because they sum up so much emotion with only one line.