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Beautiful Summer

I shiver in my winter coat

Will winter ever be over?

Will summer ever be here?

Beautiful, beautiful, summer

When the never-ending blue crashes to the shore…

I close my eyes

I am no longer sipping my hot chocolate in my fuzzy slippers

But drinking lemonade, my feet sinking into the soft, white, sand

I am reading a book on my towel, the sun beating down on my back

I am laughing and playing volleyball with my friends

I am diving through the waves with my sister

I am lifting the ice cream to my greedy mouth

And feeling it melt on my tongue

I sigh

And I sink into my slippers

And I pray for summer

Beautiful, beautiful, summer

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  • Violinstrings silver member
    April 26

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    a very good idea about winter turning to summer
    a prose with some song quality and rhythm
    good imagery

  • ziggystardust
    April 26
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    great work

  • MxA
    April 26

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    Ah, this was a pleasure to read. Summer is wonderful, but also too hot sometimes, lol. Nice images, made me wanna be at the beach. Thanks for sharing.

    MxA