I've been waiting, waiting for so long
Now my time has come, I've wet myself in furore
I hear her footsteps on the floor, outside my door
Oh God this is it, must be asleep...zzzzzzzz
Oh Jesus, this is it, a life long dream coming true
I must seize the moment, soon, soon...NOWWWWW!
A throat ripped clean by teeth
An eye pushed in that gushes
Blood scored skin by nails
And a dream come true for him!
He chews on her windpipe, that she wont shout with any more
Then he crews up her eye balls, and shoves them back in there holes
She's shit herself, dirty bitch! she's dragged into the hall
And de-clothed and sucked on, as he continues to maul
He knows he can't hide from this, he's not insane
But for now he's going to feast, upon her bloody remains
Maybe hours, a day at most
Then daddy will come home and see...
Whats left of mummy hehehe
Author notes
Penguins hahaha
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Comments
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Wow...vivid imagery..I was kinda freaked out. But this is good regardless. Good job
Best of luck and thanks for entering
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dude this is so cool!. that last line made me laugh. but a good laugh at that
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That is pretty good. Got really yummy there with the whole shitting herself thing lol. Good job.
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hehehe i thought this was up ur street. glad you liked. noticed you write journals too! are they for friends to read or users like me too? i don't mind if u refuse x
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Journals: since your on my friends list your free to read them.
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Awesome WOW my friend has been rubbing off on you!!!
I love the way you've written this and the colours! must be asleep zzzzzzz love it!!
he chews on her windpipe eewwww man thats gross!
and the end is humorous and left me giggling :-) xxx welldone little poet you are truly growing!!
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