It's as though things would be
So much better
If I could wake up next to you
Every morning
Because you supress the pain
And hurt that's inside of me.
You make things right
And change the way
I see things.
We don't live in Fairyland
Where magic sparkles keep
Us together.
I know we're real, and no way
Perfect
But your still my one
In six million.
And I hope that stays
The same forever.
I can hope and I can dream
But
I can't tell what will happen
In the future.
You could stay, but maybe
You'll go.
But this time I won't
Give up hope
Because you made me stronger.
Author notes
A bit unsure about the last long, I'm not trying to be perfect as that defyes the point of the poem. Also unsure about punctuation, help would be appreciated 
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Comments
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"I know we're real, and no way
Perfect
But your still my one
In six million"
So beautiful I love this alot...Love poems are hard to pull off but you do it well :
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Oh wow this is so lovely!
Fantastic job with this piece. The strength of love overcomes all.
Bravo!
♥ kate -
the poems fantsic and im crap at spelling and grammer so i leave that to noe who knows but youve got a very cool open pen and that to me is the most importatnt thing the rest well its icingon the cake
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