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For You From Me

I知 rising from the ashes,
I知 flying through the sky.
I知 letting go, and moving on,
I知 not waiting for goodbye.

My arms are like my wings,
I知 stretching through the air.
My hair whips around my face,
I feel cleansed and aware.

Aware of me,
Aware of you,
Aware of us.

Here I stand, the part of me that had you,
Slowly disintegrating as I soar high above the earth.

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  • ertaylor
    April 26
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    beautiful!

    i love the last part, it makes me want to put a photo series with it


  • hugatree17
    April 26

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    Cool Write

    i really like this! the first paragraph was the best part for me. especially the line, "I'm not waiting for goodbye."