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Nature's Hello

Sun made his debute
peeking in my window
waving good morning

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 9

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    Good morning indeed...a warm and heart moving poetry..love it..and many thanks for sharing such a beautiful work..


    • duana
      June 10
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      I am glad you enjoyed this! I enjoyed reading your comment!


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 30

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    So much imagery within this short piece here. You see, as I have said many times, no matter how short or long a piece of writing is, if the imagery is strrong and it tells a story at the same time, then it has done its job. Well done here. Yours does both. Keep writing Duana.

    Dark Wishes
    Wayne Leon

  • hose30
    May 29

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    beautiful and colorful. This made my day. I see hope on the horizon. Great write and I miss you. I hope that you are doing fine. and that you family is well.