her pink toenails,
and bright blue bow.
are a way to mask,
her satin glow.
eyeliner gaze.
red as fire.
her nail polish,
with fake desire.
lipgloss here.
insecure?
corset there.
there is no cure!
with high heels on...
her biggest sin's.
now mini skirt?
a fate begins.
empty smile,
and push up bra.
a burning hate,
brought from afar.
Author notes
option: nail polish
name: hopelessly-broken =]
please comment and let me know what you think.
A contest entry
- Word Prompt by BarbedWireButterfly.
1650 points, ended April 27, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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your my favorite writer on AP.
possibley ever as well.
Your so very talented I just can't describe how your writing effects me.
well done.
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wow thanks so much!!!! =]
u dont no how much that means to me.
i still feel like i didnt end it properly.
but oh well
thanks take care
luv HB
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Wow...
Very well penned
You have done a great job with your chosen prompt and I wish you well in this contest 
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thanks AP mum. its been a while!
but im back to writting!
talk soon!!!!
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good to see you are back in to it xoxoxo
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I do like this. The use of imagery to give the persona a life like feel is done very well. The poem is well written and very enjoyable. One thing, sins doesn't need an apostrophe. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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oh... thanks hun. have fun judging the contest =P
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