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Image of perfection

I don't wear long sleeves
I don't wear high collars

My skin isn't black and blue
My bones aren't broken

I don't claim to be clumsy
I don't lie about bruises

Your fist doesn't scare me
Your arm seems weak

You don't come home drunk
You don't push me around

My friends all adore you
My parents call you ''son''

Everything looks perfect
Everything is a lie

You can't see my bruises
For they can't be seen

I've never been hit
But there's more to abuse

My bones aren't broken
But bones heal

You lie to me
You say you love me

I'm a fool to believe
I'm a fool

I'm not in critical condition
But I'm dying inside

You're killing me slowly
Killing my soul

You lie to me
And it's killing me

There's more to abuse
Than bruises and cuts

There's worse

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For a contest, Neon.
And I wrote this poem for someone close to me who has been emotionally and mentally abused for 20 years. If you think physical abuse is the worst thing out there, think again. You might be able to see physical abuse, but emotional abuse lasts much longer.

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  • powerful write, i really liked the lines:

    "I'm not in critical condition
    But I'm dying inside"

    This was a strong write, I wish you the best of luck in my contest and thank you for entering this piece.

    *~*bee*~*