Island of the sun
Seas of the blue
Music of the culture
It's going through me and you
Just cruising down the road
Smelling all the flowers
We don't have much time
But, just acouple of hours
The people on the beach
Just playing in the sand
We hear the sounding tune
Of a small reggae band
So get up on your feet
To hear about this thing
It's a movie about Jamaica
It's called "Cool Runnings"
Sweet Jamaica
Author notes
this song is called sweet jamaica, actually this song is my friends song he wrote this song coz he loves jamaica a PLACE..yah right and his name is buddy!!he is a great song writer and also a great friend
and also he has a video to this song on youtube
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RcoZGk4mnWY
enjoy the video
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A contest entry
- Country Lyrics by poets whisper.
650 points, ended July 14, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you need to write your own country lyrics ... not borrow your friends. Writing, means writing and not copying. I want original lyrics ... someone entered Coward Of The County .... that's called plagiarism.I had to DQ them. Even if you have your friends permission, I still want original writes. Yours.
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...I really really hate to do this...I really do...but technically the point of the contest was to be inspired by the music to write poetry...and even though it's a great song and probably will get far...all you did was rewrite the lyrics of the song...so...I'm really sorry...I'm still however going to give you three applause...
Thanl you...and I'm really sorry...I hate doing this...
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NICE
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Nice song...
cool tune to it...
If I were you, I would , under the poem, give your friend the credit since it is not your poem to avoid any danger of plagiarism
put © symbol and his name ...
TY for entering
Lynda
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idk how to use that symbol
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just copy and paste it from my comment
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which option is this?
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what?
i dont understand what you meant of this...what option??plz tell me
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