look inside your heart
Feel me there
fell my breath
so close to you can hardly touch
All powerful love
What did you think
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very beautiful..awesome job here..good i c ur from pakistan as well
..great job
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I think this is true. Sometimes this is how you feel, because a love is so close you can't reach it.
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marvellous poem. i liked the feeling
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Very Beautiful. Excellent job.
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Great
If everyone thought as you do there would not be all this hate going on. Hold on to your love for your fellow man and maybe love will be shared by all.
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I think it's beautiful. So much said in so little.
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Wow, such short words but big emotional feelings. I really like it, its very pretty even if its short. And thanks for the comment!
Sincerely,
LonelyWolf Tasagka
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