She whispered in my ear
"My dear!
If You want to eat
A pussy neat and sweet,
Let's have a saucy deal.
Make me your meal."
"I want to drag and eat you
And Like my wifey treat you.
I'm full of lust, my dear."
My tone was loud and clear.
She took me to her basement
For lustful entertainment.
She kissed my lips
And squeezed my hips,
Caressed my tummy
And mumbled, "Yummy, yummy, yummy!"
I licked her sexy butt
And called her wanton slut.
"Like a wanton whore you treat me.
Oh, eat me, eat me, EAT ME!"
I worked on open thighs
And heard her tasty cries.
WHO SAYS THE TIME WAS WASTED?
HER WAS THE SWEETEST PUSSY EVER TASTED.
A contest entry
- ~adults only II~ by jinsays.
601 points, ended April 26, 2009, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh My Word~
You broke every fan in the room~
You go on Hot Stuff
Powerful Imagery to take the Reader on a Journey
with sweat on the brow~
Ink on fireeeeeeeeeee~
Woot~
Keep that quill & Mind dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Voice & Talent
Best wishes in all You do Beautiful~
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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SINFUL!
Very naughty and very tasty
I enjoyed this, from erotica to rhyme.. who said this was a waste of time? lol
Keep on "eating" and when you're full and satiated let the writing begin..
*naughty squeezes*
Nooni
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NooNiThEWitcH
I enjot the naughty and tasty things too, and I love to "eat". Thank you for your delicious advice.
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Invigorating Read!
This was classy and humorous.
"She kissed my lips
And squeezed my hips,
Caressed my tummy
And mumbled, "Yummy, yummy, yummy!""
^Those were my favorite lines. Brought the curves of a smile smack-dab in the middle of a sexy piece of art. I love this. The imagery is wonderful, clear and crisp. Thank you for the range of emotion experienced as a reader. Quite entertaining dear, take care. -
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MaidMistaken
Thank you for your comment. You're all sweetness, honey!
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wow...that's about it! lol oh snf this wsa tastey indeed. I loved the rhyme. it wasn't cheesy but rather witty lol. expected as much from you!
Kylaya
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Kylaya Halon
You're so sweet...so yummmy!
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so i've been told in a literal aspect of the word lol
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that was the best poem i have evr read....it was rymey but not too much.....it kept my interest and i was laughing and wanting you the whole time
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earthlover0915
Thanks for liking my Sweetest P.... ever Tasted. I love you for wanting me. Kissesss!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Oh my, how delicious yum yum.
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awannabepoet
Thank you, my dear!
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Your beautiful poems always get me at the end of my seat and needing a cold shower after i read them..Beautiful and thank u for writing it
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Mystery
I take a cold shower too after writing an erotica. Let's do it together, lovely girl!
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i can see your words come to life and beg for more at the end ......
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all me an my friend can say is wow...
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Darkrainshadow
Love to you and all your friends...together
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wheew, thanks for the visual
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Wow, I think you spelled it out loud and clear.
Sexy,
love,
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JinSays
Thanks for your lustful appreciation. Kisses...wherever you want them.
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That was a good write. I like it. Good luc in the contest.
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nonsexed
Thanks a lot.
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I love what you did here hon! I enjoyed this read and good luck to you in the contest
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hotchocolate
Thank you, sweety! What I did can be repeated with a yummy friend like you.....lol......Kisses all over!
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