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The Sweetest P.... Ever Tasted

She whispered in my ear
"My dear!
If You want to eat
A pussy neat and sweet,
Let's have a saucy deal.
Make me your meal."

"I want to drag and eat you
And Like my wifey treat you.
I'm full of lust, my dear."
My tone was loud and clear.

She took me to her basement
For lustful entertainment.

She kissed my lips
And squeezed my hips,
Caressed my tummy
And mumbled, "Yummy, yummy, yummy!"

I licked her sexy butt
And called her wanton slut.

"Like a wanton whore you treat me.
Oh, eat me, eat me, EAT ME!"

I worked on open thighs
And heard her tasty cries.

WHO SAYS THE TIME WAS WASTED?
HER WAS THE SWEETEST PUSSY EVER TASTED.

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  • Desire gold member
    1 day ago
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    Oh My Word~

    You broke every fan in the room~
    You go on Hot Stuff
    Powerful Imagery to take the Reader on a Journey
    with sweat on the brow~
    Ink on fireeeeeeeeeee~
    Woot~

    Keep that quill & Mind dancing
    Thank You for sharing Your Voice & Talent
    Best wishes in all You do Beautiful~
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    October 2, 2009

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    SINFUL!

    Very naughty and very tasty
    I enjoyed this, from erotica to rhyme.. who said this was a waste of time? lol
    Keep on "eating" and when you're full and satiated let the writing begin..

    *naughty squeezes*
    Nooni


    • Galaxy2
      October 3, 2009
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      NooNiThEWitcH

      I enjot the naughty and tasty things too, and I love to "eat". Thank you for your delicious advice.


  • MaidMistaken
    September 30, 2009

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    Invigorating Read!

    This was classy and humorous.

    "She kissed my lips
    And squeezed my hips,
    Caressed my tummy
    And mumbled, "Yummy, yummy, yummy!""

    ^Those were my favorite lines. Brought the curves of a smile smack-dab in the middle of a sexy piece of art. I love this. The imagery is wonderful, clear and crisp. Thank you for the range of emotion experienced as a reader. Quite entertaining dear, take care.

    • Galaxy2
      October 2, 2009
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      MaidMistaken

      Thank you for your comment. You're all sweetness, honey!


  • Kylaya Halon
    September 12, 2009

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    wow...that's about it! lol oh snf this wsa tastey indeed. I loved the rhyme. it wasn't cheesy but rather witty lol. expected as much from you!
    Kylaya


  • earthlover0915
    July 11, 2009

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    that was the best poem i have evr read....it was rymey but not too much.....it kept my interest and i was laughing and wanting you the whole time


    • Galaxy2
      September 7, 2009
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      earthlover0915

      Thanks for liking my Sweetest P.... ever Tasted. I love you for wanting me. Kissesss!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • awannabepoet
    May 17, 2009
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    Oh my, how delicious yum yum.




  • Mystery
    May 9, 2009

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    Your beautiful poems always get me at the end of my seat and needing a cold shower after i read them..Beautiful and thank u for writing it


    • Galaxy2
      September 7, 2009
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      Mystery

      I take a cold shower too after writing an erotica. Let's do it together, lovely girl!


  • kyssmi
    April 29, 2009
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    i can see your words come to life and beg for more at the end ......


  • Darkrainshadow
    April 27, 2009
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    all me an my friend can say is wow...

    • Galaxy2
      September 7, 2009
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      Darkrainshadow

      Love to you and all your friends...together


  • Jay81
    April 27, 2009
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    wheew, thanks for the visual


  • jinsays gold member
    April 26, 2009
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    Wow, I think you spelled it out loud and clear.
    Sexy,
    love,
    jin

    • Galaxy2
      April 26, 2009
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      JinSays

      Thanks for your lustful appreciation. Kisses...wherever you want them.


  • Legitimate-Thinker
    April 26, 2009
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    That was a good write. I like it. Good luc in the contest.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    April 26, 2009

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    I love what you did here hon! I enjoyed this read and good luck to you in the contest


    • Galaxy2
      April 26, 2009
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      hotchocolate

      Thank you, sweety! What I did can be repeated with a yummy friend like you.....lol......Kisses all over!

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