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Under The Porch

Inspired by an episode of the TV show, "Touched By An Angel"


        Dark like that one night
        Under the porch there was no light
        I came to you but you never noticed
        Or if you did you didn't care
        And you pretended I wasn't even there

        I reached out to you
        My arms extended
        My spirit and yours are now being blended
        You go on sleeping like a baby with no cares
        Under a porch with no stairs

        How did you end up this way?
        Under a porch with no blanket you lay
        You're shivering
        Oh poor baby, you're quivering
        No one to keep you warm

        I would do something but I cannot
        I am only a spirit
        In this one fateful spot

        I can see your suffering
        It's written all over your face
        If I could do something...
        I can't be displaced

      So if you want to leave this world
      That's giving you much strife
      And you want to live with me in the afterlife
      I'm a dark angel, the angel of death
      I could allow you to breathe your last breath
      I could take you from this forlorn place
      Under this porch of so-called grace
      And bring you to the heaven you much deserve
      Cause I don't want you to suffer anymore on this earth

      You open your eyes
      A strong light you see
      Under the porch during the night?
      This can't be!

      I tell you what you dreamt is true
      And I will take you to a world anew
      You say...
      Could I please come with you?
             
                     

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(2001)

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    A very fine write, indeed. You have expressed your thoughts quite well. I am originally from Salt Lake City, Utah, and "Touched By An Angel", was filmed in Salt Lake. I watched the show regularly and remember expisodes where the two leading ladies sat on top of one of the towers of the Cathedral of the Madelaine, on South Temple; and on the balcony of the old St Anne's Ophanage, on 2100 South East of State St. and they filmed another episode which showed the interior of a family/businessmens restaurant: Lamb's Bar and Grill, I can't remember if they changed the name of the restaurant in that particular episode. The Utah State Film Commission, can confirm that this series was filmed in Salt Lake City. Thanks for bringing back some pleasant memories.