Call me evasive
And you say I never open up
I've been hurt so much
But I never seem to have been loved
And you're wondering
why I want to spend my time alone
But I'm remembering
all the times I should have stayed at home
You don't understand
Why I'm not talking
But are you listening?
Are you watching?
'Cause I'm done pleading
and I've been screaming
'til my heart is sore
But you're not listening
So don't ask me
to tell you all the things I feel
'Cause I won't bother
to tell you the things you'll never hear
You think I'm distant
When you look into my eyes
But you never knew
all the times you made me cry
You don't understand
Why I'm not talking
But are you listening?
Are you watching?
'Cause I'm done pleading
and I've been screaming
'til my heart is sore
But you're not listening
Can't you hear me crying out
from my frozen heart?
I'm right before your eyes
and I'm falling apart
You don't understand
Why I'm not talking
But are you listening?
Are you watching?
'Cause I'm done pleading
and I've been screaming
'til my heart is sore
But you're not listening
So I'm done pleading
'cause I've been screaming
I've said it all before
But you weren't listening
Do you think this would make a good song?
Comments
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Wow. When I first read this it was slightly disconcerting how eloquently you voiced many of the things I've been feeling lately. I really liked
"You think I'm distant
When you look into my eyes
But you never knew
all the times you made me cry".
Personally, I think this could be a totally awesome song, and it seems like a pretty relatable topic which is a plus. It's annoying that I can't express my thoughts very clearly, so I'll just say I really enjoyed it on a personal level. -
this is very good painting buddy, very emotional makes me think.
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It's so awesome dude!!
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