I heard that hearts are like music -
the soothing serenade & the guitar solo bouncing off the chambers,
make the melody skip a beat.
Then there is range - the notes & capillaries offer difference
so still, remain the same in feeling.
We'll dance to the beat of each, to know
each semi-tone and artery say love.
Author notes
28/150
I am just a girl, loving a boy & i'm proud of it.
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- ENTER ANYTHING. by perfectsunset.
625 points, ended June 9, 57 entries
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Comments
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I love this poem. I've always loved poetry about music and about love, combine them together and it creates some of, what I think, the best poetry out there. Great job. The words you chose really worked well to help visualize the whole poem.
~ToxicSuicide. -
the notes & capillaries offer difference
so still, remain the same in feeling.
-aww god; this is so sweetly put in made me smile. your writing revels in such amazing honesty. gorgeous. -
I love your comparisons!
Beautiful(:
Great job; good luck<3
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