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My Sister, My Guardian

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We are sisters forever.
My older sister is like a mother
and she tells us what to do in all kinds of weather.
I have three sisters ,
we had fun playing games together.
We want to be like each other.
So we look at the mirror
because we want to look like sisters too.
We  look into each other eyes
and compare our noses and color of our eyes.
and who is taller and who is shorter
we would say I am the favorite daughter.
my older sister is not our mother
but she loves us all and we listened to her
I am older than my two sisters
when we had a game , they were first
I love my two sisters.
when we laughed it would be an outburst.
now we are friends and listen to each other
more than a friend is a guardian.
Sisters always need each other
in every situation and every plan.







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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    May 26

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    This is excellent it must be awsome to have a close family. Thank you for sharing and it was a pleasure to read.

  • excellent~

    Soft and beautiful.......................
    From start to finish........
    Best of luck in the contest
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

    I penned one for this one too hope you come read mine............

  • A very lovely and lyrical poem that was a pleasure to read for its natural expression of sisterly love. Best of luck in my contest and thanks for entering.

  • I like your take on the prompt. great job on your poem. I do however need you to place the link in your Author's Notes to credit the artist please. I will come back and check.

    good luck
    kat