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Pondering Love

Our fights were harsh
Our love was true
And in the end I still love you

The bitter night comes and sweeps you from my grasp
And as I lay awake next to you
I listen to your snores
And I ponder
And I wonder
And I realize
I don’t want to lose this

I try so hard to think it’d be better this way without each other
Yet I remember the times we’ve had
And it’s so much better when your there

I’ve attempted the things we’ve done
With someone else
And it’s not the same
You know what I want
You know me so perfectly

All I ask is a second chance
A true second chance
Forget our past
Just stay with me
Without you I fear I’ll fall apart
Go back to my past
Rewind and fall so fast

Our fights were harsh
Our love was true
And in the end I'll always love you

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  • This is the truth you stated to bring the honesty in your relationship..I appreciate this thought..love it..and many thanks ro sharing it..well done..