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Who - You

It gets a bit hazy right now, every once in a while a bit crazy right now...
who who who, where did these feelings go wrong, who who who
To live my life from wrong... these feelings deep inside me.. yeah yeah, yeah yeah
are here to just but guide me..... ..... ..... ....

Who - You

It gets a bit hazy right now, every once in a while a bit crazy right now...
It gets a bit hazy right now, every once in a while, crazy right now...
It gets a bit hazy right now, every once in a while a bit crazy right now...
It gets a bit hazy right now, every once in a while, crazy right now...

(THANKS FOR THE LYRICS...!!!]

i'VE GOT ANOTHER CONFESSION TO MAKE...

How to become a writer... ha'

PS: In three (of there} easy lesson's

Today is gonna be the day... that they blame it all again on you
somehow I should of stole the word's from another better group than you...

I don't believe (Who - You) anybody... feels the slaved, I do......

cor blimey, this aint half hard work....

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  • Very creative and so fresh!!! I enjoyed the beat and rhyming of your words...I was just singing and enjoying!!! Thank you so much for the entry!





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