Why the hell am I in this place?
My mind aches, it's starting to race!
Rattling chains, I'm going insane!
You drugged me and tied me up!
Your treating me like a worthless pup!
Rattling chains, I'm going insane!
What have I done to make you think that I'm ill?
The murders I did were only for a little thrill!
Rattling chains, I'm insane!
"Let me out! Let me out!"
I scream and I shout.
Rattling chains, I'm insane!
Yes I escaped! I will run for my life!
What the hell are you doing with that knife?
Rattling chains, I'm no longer Insane...
...I'm DEAD!
Author notes
I wrote this for a picture prompt contest, since I love insanity!
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration by Firequeen.
700 points, ended April 27, 22 entries
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Comments
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Very insane, and the repetition helps give off this psychotic tone. Nice and dark, thanks for entering and good luck.
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I felt like your words were better than the pic itself. I saw the pic and was slightly disappointed. Great work here.
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love it <3
wow i love this such
raw emotion
you got talent boy
xoxo Dee Dee xoxo
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Awsome poem joe. I love all your poetry. its so deep and emotional.
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I adored this
Not only did it grab me from word one
but the end wow
Just wonderful
Thank you for this great entry
Fire
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