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If.

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If this world

was upside down

I would swim through

the clouds,

catch that sunset

and tow it back to you.

I would anchor it

close by as we

floated on cloud nine

and night will

never arrive.

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  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    May 4

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    Lovely... Simply beautiful...


    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Kate


  • Cannonsfire
    April 29

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    Those sentiments are mine but I don't have to tell you that now do I Love Chez


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    April 28

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    Wow!! Thses are beautifully expressed sentiments for some lucky soul!! I'm wishing you all the best, and good luck in the contest!! Peace, love & hugs, xx Cyn xx


  • geckogirl silver member
    April 26
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    welcome back hon... perfect piece...


  • Amera gold member
    April 25

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    I'm a real sucker for love poems and this short verse is really fantastic. I think this is the way we all feel when we first fall in love. Sort of the "I'd climb the highest mountain" type of thing. But then... after awhile try asking your husband to stop off at the store for a quart of milk on the way home from work. LOL, Ain't life funny?

    Love,
    Amera


  • Pure Thought silver member
    April 25
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    You my dear could swim to me anytime and I wolud be your island of refuge

    loved this


  • crimsondew
    April 25
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    Awww..this is just lovely and beautiful...


  • Simply Kristen
    April 25
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    awww

    I really liked this. =)

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