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What I Want

                         
I want someone to hold my hand.
I don't want some one tanned
I want a nice guy.
One i can bake for.
One that will hold my door.
Someone who takes showers.
Someone that will stare at me for hours.




One I can depend on.
One that will stay with me forever long.
One that i can say s MINE.
One thats eyes shine.




Someone that hugs me tight.
One who will never get in a fight.
Someone that likes to have fun.
Someone who likes to fly kites.


Someone who adores me.
Someone I'm glad to see.
One whos smile is bright.
One that does not bite.=)


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