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[ My heart is aching ]

My heart is aching

With not pain but joy

I'm relieved now that weight is lifted of my chest

I can finally feel my heart,

It's gliding.

I close my eyes

I'm flying, I'm soaring

The world is safe

I did it

I can relax now

my burden is over

Any advice?

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  • ziggystardust
    April 26, 2009
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    Sounds painful

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 25, 2009

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    excellent

    All I can say is what an uplifting poem! It's nice to read something positive. Lately I've read poems evolving around nothing but self pity and other negative stuff. I wish you much joy. Thanks for sharing.
    Brian