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Maybe?

He said he really loved me
he said he really cared
but this doesn't make sense
when he's not even there.
He said he had butterflies
he said i was "the one"
but i'm still sitting here
and he's far away and gone.
He promised me forever
and looked into my eyes
promises died in their wake
too exhausted to lie.
He looks at me today
tears held deep inside
promises blossom in his words
for feelings neither us can deny.

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