A
poem,
delightful,
giving pleasure
to the poet’s mind,
like waves of imagery
weaving creative verses
of haiku’s nature scenery
and senryu’s human memory,
with added couplet,forming a tanka.
©summer51, April 14, 2009
Author notes
Words used: Poem, Poet, (Free) verse, Haiku, Senryu and Tanka. 
In a list
A contest entry
- poet, poem ,freeverse, tanka ,haiku and senryu by Purush.
750 points, ended April 29, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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CONGRADULATIONS ON THE silver
a wonderful write congratulations on a simple and elegant write
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Hi Drag aine
Thanks again, my friend.
My congratulations to you, too, on your HM.
summer51
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Summer, summer, summer!
Your accomplishments grow!
I am so very proud of you!!!!!!
love and hugs,
Mumsy
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Hello, hello, Dearest!
Because of you and Oldboy. I owe you and some good friends here many things. I'm learning day by day.
Thank you, Mumsy!
summer51 -
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And are you getting any sleep?
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Not much...
. But am used to that.
How are you, Mumsy?
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Back and forth with the tired stuff, too.
And playing in the Whodunnit!!
Still need plot revelations about the Script Girl.
Hmmmmmmmmmmmm....A silent partner,
a backer of the play, name of Oldboy,
arranged your travel, brought you here,
got you the part, so you could be together!
How's that??? -
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Hahaha !
Well...that's okay with me, Mumsy! I didn't know that you're a dreamer too, eh?
Thanks, Mumsy! will visit you there later...need to finish my collab. with Lee. Another "blockbuster" for the both of us...lol... He's in a hurry eh.... collaborating to himself....
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" collaborating to himself"
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Oh, gee!
Mumsy, you laughing ah!
Nice feeling here... you smiling.
Take care Mumsy. I will post my entry to 'napomo" writing poetry, then will finish my tanka for Lee to collab. with me.... not to himself...
See yah, later!
summer51
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beautul, simple and true
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Hi, Mantha
Yes, thank you very much.
summer51
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an artistic poem beautifully worded
A
poem,
delightful,
giving pleasure
to the poet’s mind,
like waves of imagery
weaving creative verses
of haiku’s nature scenery
and senryu’s human memory,
with added couplet,forming a tanka.
All the best in my contest -
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Hi, Purush
Thank you very much for the nice feedback.
summer51
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A formed poem about poetry :-) ingenious. I really liked the simplicity of this.
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Thank you, Aedara
summer51
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