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Shot in the dark

A shot in the dark,
and I'm on the ground.

If tears were blood,
I would have been dead
that cold, harsh night
on the grass
outside my workplace.
I would have bled out
on that back room floor
as I stared up
at that blood red sign
and cried to my heart's content.

The rain falls quietly,
something I still feel
in the numb state of mind
I am in.

No pain.
No happpiness.
No sorrow.
No love.

No, definitely not love.

Just the silence.
Only the rain
as it falls onto my cold skin.
I may as well be dead.

Because, according to Arron,
no one would care.

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Comme tojours, Apprecier.

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  • Anemone-Rose
    September 21

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    oooh my dear, i have read and felt your emotion through this poem, so sad and such agonizing sorrow. my dear, never forget i love you.

  • Not sure what this is for but I did enjoy it very much. You did a good job on the poem Thank you so much for sharing this write.