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my online love


I am here
you are there
i seem not to see you
but my heart knows you well

i cant come
it kills me
have to go online
so i can see you near

this love, i don't know?
will it end?
will it last......
I hope so!

i cant stand a day
without his messages
he makes me weak
'm freaking in love with him

he's not around
i don't know if his fooling around
i trust him so much
i never felt this much

you said " I always think of you"
i felt the same way too...
I always dream of you
I thought many times how i will meet you

to those who read
i say to you
love has no limitations
even internet makes a loving relation...

what do you feel while reading...?

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  • Chrysalis
    October 2

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    I know where this is coming from.. naughty girl thehehe... just kidding.

    trust I think is plays a big part in a relationship. It was cupid I think who said that love cannot live where there is no trust. (true)
    Online love thing makes it hard itself since you don't get to see eachother, (long distance and all that)

    Thanks for sharing this I do believe that a part from a persons emotions flowing thru a poem, a person also reveals his or her experiences and more importantly feelings.
    _+_+_+_+
    haha (seriously I don't know what the hell I'm talking about) ? hahahhaha

    so I shall just fade away...

    Oh and yes before I do I hope you will continue to write and be inspired.

    Blessed be

    -Blanche