This is cool, this is fun
I'm playing with a loaded gun,
Put the barrel to my head
Just one shot and I'll be dead.
Put the rope around my neck
This will hurt, but what the heck
Wait until the rope pulls tight,
It will help to make things right.
Carve a star into my arm
The cut will heal so where's the harm?
Sit back and watch the blood flow free
I'm bleeding out my misery.
Put cement shoes upon my feet
And take me where the river's deep,
Listen to my final scream
Before my body's washed downstream.
So many ways that I could die
And yet all I do is sit and cry
I've had enough, this is true
But I'm too afraid to follow through
Hopefully there will come a time
I can finally end this life of mine.
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Amazing. I feel the same way. I don't mind saying it on here. No one knows who I am; yesterday I was in such a state I actually reached the stage of sitting in my window, legs hanging out. Couldn't bring myself to let go thought...
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Man so right!
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5/5 Stars
Very good poem. I relate to this story so much I feel so sad sometimes I wish my life was over but I can never get the courage to do it.
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This is So AWSOME!!! It's like true! 2!
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this is an AMAZING poem and i acually think the same way. i hope that u keep righting like this, this is great!
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OMG this poem is amazing i love the ryming its amazing and the last cupple lines I've had enough,this is true but i'm too afraid to follow through i love that line it says alot amazing write
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this is AWESOME,
i love the ryming
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