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Kiss this

Hell no I don't take that shit in my house
You kicking down the walls and screaming out loud
Get your boots and shut the door behind you
Because baby you can kiss this
Thats all your ever going to see

Author notes

Jus about me throwing out da trash cuz that shit was gettin dirty and needed to be takin out wha a bitch she really was
Written March 8th, 2004

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  • Sexyboi
    August 3, 2008
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    I loved how you seem so strong in this poem I loved the message too....kiss this...very true. I dont put up with crap anymore myself i like that you seem like a no nonsense kind of woman. We need stronger women around this day and age. Great write very powerful and thought provoking.


  • Dreamana
    July 22, 2008

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    If is was not for relationships, AP would be all the poorer. No-one should have to take abuse, and chucking them out is wise. This is there second of your writes that I have read, and there seems to be so much anger contained.


  • Shydreamer3
    March 8, 2004
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    Great write this is really nice I liked it and thanks for your comments on my poem "My problem" and "ABCDorian". This was a motivating poem to anyone who has to get someone out of their life who isn't good for them.