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Time Never Lost

One little word,
four letters,
that can alter your universe as you know it.

In a single moment,
you know.
The change unmistakable.

Your heart,

a flurry of emotion,
you tremble at the sound
but the feeling undeniable.

Never to be repeated,
one of a kind.
The truest of emotions,
pure from the heart.

A word never to be forgotten,
a time never to be lost.

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  • inder silver member
    June 29
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    Nice write

    ends with such profound truths and flows very well indeed! A good read.Tick on poetess


  • carlylane
    May 20
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    Thank you all for your comments, very much appreciated!!!



  • Emmyb gold member
    May 3
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    powerful. very interesting and loving.
    a solid poem.

    One little word,
    four letters,
    that can alter your universe as you know it.

    yes, this is true. it can alter your universe. I know this first hand

    well done. x x x x thanks for the moving piece.

    Emma


  • TheFootballPlayer
    April 27
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    Once again, your amazing.... My favorite on the site...


  • LettersFromtheSky
    April 26
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    I think this poem speaks a lot of truth in regards to the subject. Very well done.


  • glenn shannon silver member
    April 25
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    love this its so timely and pure its gold

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