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I love you

This language that we speak
leaves meanings a bit weak

A thousand times I say I love you
a thousand times you've said it too

I never tire of speaking how I feel
only wish words could be more real

Passion deep inside my heart
though my lips strive in there part

to explain how deeply I love you
no other words or other way is new

so gladly I tell you again my dear
and whisper I love you softly in your ear

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  • Tqop
    May 14
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    Awe...
    This is so beautiful.
    Great job.


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    May 10
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    So beautiful and touching, love and caring and deeply profound.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    April 25

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    wow

    this really very sweet, and it's clear the feeling is mutual..another solid and good write again my friend..


  • Puppydog gold member
    April 25

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    SO SWEET AND TENDER!!!

    I believe each of us dreams of finding a love like this! One where mere words just cannot express fully.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 24

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    I love you is so often said
    not many prove it true
    But when your heart is led
    all meaning is brand new

    I close my eyes and listen to
    the soft words fall from your lips
    Yes my dear, I love you too...


    Passions

    Thank you sweetheart for this piece.

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