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NightStand delima

you are 
such a senseless whore
this miserable dreamer
privately uttered
to the demon
striding across the blackened ceiling,
then loudly he lurched forward
rising through the air
when unexpectedly a brilliant light
wrapped his body then gently he fell to the earth
as he reached over the nightstand
savoring the last drops of that Red Bull.

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sometimes you just get the strangest ideas.

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  • Purple-Buddha
    September 3, 2009

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    Haha! yes Red Bull inspires the craziest writes! Great imagery i must say! very vivid. Great job


  • darkyinsoul
    April 25, 2009

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    lol... red bull mixed with anything???
    Good one
    Thanks for the share
    Darky


  • xxvampyregirlxx
    April 25, 2009

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    This is... different but its a good different i like it! Thanks for the entry and goodluck in the contest


  • darell gold member
    April 25, 2009

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    Awesome!

    Love the imagery your witty words
    provided. Intense action that captivates
    the mind and thrills the spirit.
    The essence of animal desire painted
    on the canvas of the mind. Clever!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 24, 2009
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    lmao

    yet another odd one by you, i like these.

    Good luck

    Passions


  • messyjessydirtygirl
    April 24, 2009
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    hahah, this is great

    great ilusstration... i enjoyed this..thanks

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