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Who Knew

All the pretty words you said
All the sweet promises twirling in my head
Who knew you’d take my heart and break it?

Who knew these tears I’d shed?

You were my soul
You were my dream
You were everything to me.

Now my soul is broken
And I can’t….I can’t take it!


Want to tear my heart from my chest
Feel the blood coat my fingers

Drip drip onto the floor
I won’t let you hurt me anymore.

All the promises you said to me
All the words that passed your lips
I believed them and look where it got me
With blood dripping on the floor.

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  • melphleg gold member
    June 1

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    Oh so sad. Heart break, broken trust is painful. You've captured that pain and feelings of hurt in this piece.