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Declaration of Sorrow

I'm sorry I couldn't stand up
to your critisisms
and that I bent and
began to fall apart...

This is My Declaration OF Sorrow
no im not doing ok
im

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apart. Nothing is the same
and I cannot pretend
anymore.

I live to feel.
but I don't know what I feel
without the breath in my lungs
its pointless
to try to live a life of
false pretentions.

This is my Declaration of Sorrow
march in time with me
as we raise our heads
and sing the lamentations
that we'd held inside.

This Is my Declaration of Sorrow
March in time with me
as we thaw our freezing hearts,
and drink the decadence
of our own sorrow.

Author notes

March with me to forget our own pain and look beyond...

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  • momwitzman
    April 28
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    Wow!

    I really like this. I hear your pain and sorrow. I love your word pictures. Feelings...yea!


    • Walls-within
      April 29
      Edit | Reply
      Thanks Donna. I am glad you liked this...though you have an awkward way of showing it lol.