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Lyra

Coming home one night she
saw a note on the door
frowning she plucked it off
and read it over.

She read it over once more
terror stealing her heart
she crumpled the note up
and headed for her room.

She packed what little she had
making haste for she had little time
her family was put in danger
for her staying where she was.

Leaving the house in a hurry
she ran down the drive to pause
and glance back at her beloved home
tears streaked her face.

Days turned to weeks
as she wandered around
hardly eating anything at all
she fell to her knees.

Soon she was found
and held captive for several days
not knowing what to do
she pleaded for death.

 

Soon her plea became a reality

as she sat there watching 

her captives bring her life

to an end as she whispered "Grave."

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  • peadiotrocity101
    October 20
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    i dont like this poem.


  • AmbiguousDesire
    October 15
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    freakin wow

    That is all I can say

  • this is great. Incredible imagery.
    amazingly written.

  • very very sad and a unique title too. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest you really have a good write

  • AWESOME!!!!

    Wow! I was deeply touched bt this one. It is very sad. I really like your poetry. I can't wait to read more. ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~


  • pain is love.
    April 27

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    Sad

    This was very sad. I thought it had good imagery. I think the flow could be a little better but really it was a poem well done and made me feel sad for her. Good job!

  • Very touching story. I really enjoyed it it was very well done and very full of imagery You did a very good job on this I lthought it said a lot Thank you for sharing

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