You wrap me in a blanket
of your passionate words
You pull me close
with arms of
protection
You hold my heart
with a sense of delicacy
You whisper to me
"I'm your Thunder
and you,
my love,
are my lightning;
I will always
come after you."♥
A contest entry
- Thunder & Lightning by RedAquarius.
1000 points, ended April 30, 19 entries
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Comments
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That's a sweet notion, to be each other's thunder and lightning. I quite like it. There are a couple of spots I might consider removing excess words but this is a fine poem as it stands. Good job.
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thank you
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