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Her...

Stealer
of my heart,
Keeper
of the key

Lovers
for the rest
of eternity

Author notes

Septolet - Just another tribute to Kim.

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  • Nomadic Prince
    April 27

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    Good Show!

    oo, classy. :0) I approve greatly! Well done, you kept a consistent syllable count and made it rhyme, that is especially beautiful in my opinion.
    -NP


  • individuality gold member
    April 24

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    a good piece of poetry which shows love in the smiling realms, where hearts capture time and speed through eternity.