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Why?

Why do you have to leave?
Did you fulfill all the goalsyou wanted to achieve?
Im going to miss you that is true
But maybe it is the best for you
Not in pain
You want to be with Bud
You want to go home
You have forgotten who I am
seeing you in this state makes me waht to cry
seeing you fall kills me inside
I want to see you one last time before you leave
But they won't let me and I want to scream
Why do you have to leave?
Why?

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  • camus gold member
    November 9

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    I got the impression that this was about some friend or relative who is dying but I could be wrong. It is as though you want to release them from their pain - "not in pain" - but will still miss them as you prepare yourself for "one last time before you leave". I like it, Wolfy, and I like you too. Tony x

  • EmoLoverNinja
    September 17
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    I really like this
    and thanks for the comment


  • Emoforever
    June 2
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    i like it its so good.You express your self good.

  • dis is really gud=]

  • WOW

    hey wulfy im back to rad this well way to go on the meaning cause i get that you don't understand what's going on or a friend has gone nice read keep it up

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