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Chaos Ride

theme park
cloud-puff day
worth waiting
how many times have you gone
(who cares)
take me on
chaos ride

fantastic loops and fancy corkscrews
reclusive & strapped
seated ready to be treated

metal teeth; railed wheels
in climbing anxiety
higher and higher

cords and gears up
hits top and holds
momentary silence

then, when we go down
even we can't get our screams out
primal release
laughing on my way down
tickled, let's do it again
it's worth waiting
again we ride

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  • Mantha
    April 24
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    Enjoyed the ride Thank you